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10th iteration, does my landing page make sense?

Hey everyone!

I'm on my 10th iteration on my landing page (https://tellspin.app/). I've tried all sorts of combinations of text.
Some things I've tried:

  1. "Be nice to developers"
  2. "Manage Slack Chaos"
  3. "Rotate #support - one engineer at a time"

Nothing seems to move the needle much.

Hoping for some honest feedback here, thanks!

on June 1, 2021
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    The page's font are a bit too big to be easily read other than that, I totally get what the tool does and I think it's genius! I always wondered what happens when people cycle in and out of teams on Slack...well I am glad you answered that for me today!

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    Are you A/B testing at all? Looking at all the data will be more informative than my personal opinion, however I'll also give my feedback:

    Pros:

    • The top of the page is great! Clear and concise -- I know exactly what it is.

    Cons:

    • Possibly too much text. I found myself beginning to skim each block of text that was >4 lines.
    • Along the same lines, I don't think the FAQ needs to be on the landing page. If I wanted that info, I'd go look for it.

    Nits:

    • "Increase response times" means make response times longer, I'd use the word "improve"
    • "Setup" is a noun, should be: "Set up in minutes"

    Not sure if you've seen this post but it probably says everything better than I can: https://www.indiehackers.com/post/looking-back-to-2020-these-are-5-landing-page-mistakes-indie-hackers-keep-doing-over-and-over-10e6d30f7a

    Anyway, overall looks good. Good luck!

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      Thank you for the in-depth feedback.

      Good call on the "increase response times", I switched it to "improve". I'll iterate again on the text sections, I was thinking the same thing, that they weren't to the point as much as I'd like

      I really appreciate your write up.