Sharing my landing page for my Linux app.

The every 53 sec line is very catchy, it really caught my attention, but I didn’t really understand your service until I read the “what we do” section, which did not bother to read initially because it is too wordy and text were too small and crowded in term of css text-spacing and text-height.

Anyway, really interesting app your selling there! I would consider buying it if it’s cheaper haha. All the best!

Donald, Howu
https://howu.io

The 53 seconds phrase is catchy, great! But you should consider explaining better what the service is about. After reading the hero I still didn't understand if you were selling an insurance or a tracking service.Think like this: how would The New York Times explain your service in one or 2 sentences? Besides, you could give a source for the 53 seconds claim.

If you are like "Find my Iphone" for Linux, right? Think of someway to say that.

I think that you should be more visual, check this and compare: https://www.apple.com/icloud/find-my-iphone/
Btw, your first phrase is much better than theirs.

I dislike the buy button. It is too abrupt. I need to be convinced before I think in buying.

Please remove Zuc from your social proof... it is not. 3 or 4 real friends will work much better.

Hi Javier,

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Awesome website! Just curious, did you play around with the scrolling functionality? Seems a bit off.

I think it's overall pretty good. It's a good idea for an app too.

I added some more detailed feedback here: http://cdwac2v5sdfh96n.unfaintapp.com/

Looks great! Personally, the loading screen is a little long.