I am beta launching my e-commerce platform.
I am beta launching my e-commerce platform.
Instead of a brand starting a store front with bunch of products, idea is to create multiple smaller but highly targeted shops towards a buyer persona. Build a community around that persona followed by shop and products.
Would love to know what you think !
#landing-page-feedback
Great idea but where are the visuals? A little to plain and minimal for me. You need images of rich storefronts, aka this could be your ecommerce store. Also would suggest cutting back the text and making a 30 second video instead. Sell me the sizzle - you have my attention for 15 seconds.
I love the concept but the website could make a better case for why this is awesome. I think this is awesome!
Thanks Unity!, I've updated the page with some more details and simplified some. Please check it out if you get a moment!
The website is a little bit confusing, not sure that I caught the idea...
Thanks for checking the page out Zencentric!, I've updated the page with some details and simplified it. Please check it out if you get a moment!
Looks like it's more clear now. I would suggest shortening all texts as for people don't like to read, add more pictures and more examples. I think it will not be easy to find customers so maybe it's worth to create your own brand communities as real working examples.
Good luck!