A newsletter landing page in 2 hours... roast me

Great website honestly! You only needed 2 hours? Then I don´t want to say how long it took us create paperless.io 😅 If you have feedback let me know

I am giving feedback on the reviewed version.

Positives:

1. Good copy.
2. Good tilted section that highlights the value you will be providing.
3. Good use of Bill Gates quote.

Improvements:

Hero Section:

It needs an overhaul. Always use text on the left side for hero. It's a natural reading pattern. It is the copy that the visitor should be reading first.
Make the font-size of the headline bigger. Consider something like 60px.
Use a simpler image that does not need words to convey the message. You already used the copy to make an initial impression. Use an image that supplements it.
If you really want to use that quote of Sugar Ray Leonard, you can use it before the email input in italics in a smaller font.

My alternative suggestion to the image and the quote is to use a sample of monthly video interview in the hero section.

Why?

A. It supplements the copy that you are really providing quality content which teaches something new.
B. It makes you stand out as you already gave the user a glimpse of what to expect.
C. Very few newsletters use a video because they are all about text. It's your value proposition. Why not make it count?

Hope this helps.

My 3 main suggestions.

1. Better no logo, than a wrong one
The logo doesn't match with the rest of the page both in terms of color and font (this may be a personal impression, but it's not common to use a random font only for the logo).

Plus the position and dimension are confusing.

Where do you want to attract people's attention?

The main copy has to be central. Now instead I see:

• the logo,
• the huge space below,
• the picture.

Based on the copy is better to reduce the dimension of the logo. Reduce the space below. And put a bigger headline on the vertical center of the section above the fold.

2. Too much copy above the fold
There's too much stuff to read.

The image contains copy. The headline is long. Also the subhead is quite long.

I had to put time and attention to get your message. Visitors won't be that generous.

3. What problem do you target?
What pain of the reader do you want to eliminate with your newsletter?

It is not 100% clear.

Will it be just a historical newsletter? Or will it help me with my problem/fear/stress?

Did you consider a title specific on the problem?
Something like: "Are you afraid to fail in your business?"
Or more in general: "Do you have PROBLEM X?"

This will make clear the problem, and also it will help you to have shorter more direct copy.

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Let me know if this makes sense for you.

Hey! I like the idea actually, but I left some comments on top of the page itself here: https://capsule.click/commentary/39350a10-c63f-426a-b622-ab63014ad790

No big red flag. I think it's good to go as a MVP.

Once you get certain amount of subscribers, you can count on them for feedback.