App feedback
https://itunes.apple.com/us/app/nao/id1453146734
We launched a social diary to encourage mental well-being.
It's for Stress / Lonlinesss / Anxiety / Depression / etc.
I need cruel feedback from you.
Nao. : iOS: https://itunes.apple.com/us/app/nao/id1453146734 Google Play: https://play.google.com/store/apps/details?id=com.nao
#landing-page-feedback
I feel like it's really hard to make the app justice with app store pages, even if that's your main channel. Beyond that, I think your message might be a bit unclear. You need to narrow down the value proposition to like 10 words.
I personally have no idea what SNS means without looking it up. (I'm probably not in your target market, but something to consider.)
Great advice!
I think I need to think about the key message to users...