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Veronika gave you a lot of great feedback, I would also insist into moving some stuff "above the fold". Your CTA is okay but how about you show some real-scenarios that you've worked on instead? How did you help Site X or site Y (Examples) ? What did you find (Learnings) ? What vanity metrics can you show-off (i.e. After our analysis ranked went from top25 on Google to top10)
Your pricing shouldn't be at the bottom after the opening, move your service explanation further up so when I scroll I see what you actually sell and why do you have such generic FAQs? I am sure there're more interesting questions and answers your clients ask from you!?
Betim, you're in an incredibly competitive space.
Your headline "Convert your visitors into customers" is used by so many other companies (even ones that aren't your competitors) so I'd position it differently. I'm a fan of using what works but readers also get tired of seeing the same phrases over and over.
In order to understand what you truly provide for your clients, I'd ask them, "[Client name], what was the roadblock you were experiencing that made you hire us? What don't you have to worry about now that we've helped you?"
You can get a goldmine of information from those answers and create laser-focused copy for the clients you want to attract.
Right now, I'm not sure why I'd want to go with you guys. How are you different? Everyone can say they're professional. Lots of people have a decade of experience. Lots of people can make guarantees to bring more traffic.
But why you? Do you have certain industry experience? Do you have experience with certain types of problems? Are you easier to work with?
All of your features talk about what prospects are going to get if they hire you. What they actually want to know is how. How are you going to drive more traffic? How are you going to figure out what content your client should have on their site? What are performance-driven tools?
You use a lot of marketing jargon in your copy. Even your subhead says "improve overall marketing effectiveness". What is that supposed to mean? Are you going to implement all of the 19 traction channels? Are you going to act as my CMO? Are you going to cold email influencers?
Ask your clients why they hired you. Future prospects will better resonate with the copy you assemble with your clients' answers.
Hope this helps.