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BOOOM - destroy my landing page :)

https://www.sheetpages.com/
submitted this linkon June 18, 2020
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    Some thoughts:

    1. Add more right-margin in CTA button between the Google logo and text "Join Beta ... ". Also, does the button need to be that wide?
    2. Too much white space between "Best Features Ever" section and "Performance Data" section. Also, you can make Performance Data an H1 header.
    3. "Start Your Business Idea Now" section - the entire card should be much less width. You don't need that much space to type in an email address.
    4. Get rid of the last "Made with Sheet Pages" section. It looks unstyled.

    These fixes aside, it should look good.

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    -Fix all the typos, formatting, and spacing (for example "Create your LandingPage"--> Create your landing page).
    -remove "start to" from "start to capture emails" (this appears twice, and it's extra text that doesn't add to your pitch).
    -The final section to fill out email and start is extremely wide.