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Can you help critique this landing page?

by Farez Rahman

Hi guys. Just finished my landing page and would love to get your feedback on it. When you've looked at it, please answers the questions below. Thanks!

URL: https://markfolder.com

Questions:

  1. Are you willing to sign up right now? If not, what would you need to see to get to that point?

  2. How well the page sustained your interest on a scale of 1-10. What do you suggest be rewritten or redesigned to help it better sustain your interest?

  3. What’s unclear? What unanswered questions are you left with?

  4. Did you find something really interesting you wanted even more details on?

  5. If you had to delete half the page's imagery and copy, which would it be?

  6. What triggered your “Untrue! That’s scammy sales speak!” reflex?

Thank you!

Farez Rahman's avatarFarez Rahman
on June 17, 2020
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    Hi Farez, here are my reactions to your page in a short video https://www.loom.com/share/52e20cc979f54451a751df297edfab1a

    nathanrodgers's avatar nathanrodgers
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    6 years ago
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      Hi Nathan. That was a superb video feedback. Thanks for doing that for me!

      Yes I totally got that Key Features section upside down... it should be about the benefit first, as you pointed out. I should have started by writing Key Benefits instead of Key Features for the title!

      Awesome.

      Farez Rahman's avatar Farez Rahman
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      6 years ago
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        Glad you found it helpful!

        nathanrodgers's avatar nathanrodgers
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        6 years ago
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    1. No, but I don't bookmark things often, so probably not the target market.
    2. 4/10 -- also probably biased because of #1.
    3. How is this better than keeping a document or documents of links?
    4. I get what it does, but how does it help me or make my life better? Folders are great, but what else?
    5. I'd remove the slideshow in favor of showing all that stuff at once (even if you have to scroll. The slideshow felt like I was waiting just to see the next thing. Most people are impatient, show it in several columns or allow me to scroll at a faster pace to see that stuff.
    6. Nothing triggered that reflex!

    Think you could get a lot of value from converting the carousel hero image thing to some static images.

    austencam's avatar austencam
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    6 years ago
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      Thanks @austencam, that's fabulous feedback. You've answered a question that's been on my mind about the carousel images too!

      Farez Rahman's avatar Farez Rahman
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      6 years ago
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    I don't use twitter, but I love the idea. It's easy to understand the concept from your screenshots.

    ryanh1's avatar ryanh1
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    6 years ago
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      That's great to hear, thanks!

      Farez Rahman's avatar Farez Rahman
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      6 years ago
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    1- Nope. Not interested yet.

    2- 3/10

    • Font " light " not very clear. Maybe use a " regular " font.
    • Replace the 3 images with real images represent your plugin according to your titles.
    • Sign up now form need a new design.
      Possible to use Black/White sections to make solid landing page.

    3- I think I just need to see " Real 3 images to know more about your plugin "

    4- Not a lot.

    5- None.

    6- None

    As a conclusion, I think you need more tweaks on your design and show more images or a quick video display your plugin features.

    Good Luck.
    Frontendor.com

    Frontendor's avatar Frontendor
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    6 years ago
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      Thanks @Frontendor. Very useful feedback there. Yes I think real product images would work better than those conceptual ones! Cheers.

      Farez Rahman's avatar Farez Rahman
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      6 years ago
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