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Hi Ben, I agree with zsumair there is too much content on the landing page. It is overwhelming.

Few tips:

Shorten your mission statement to one sentence. Rather than a paragraph.
Remove the green bar in #proof. My eyes are jumping between cta and the green bar.
Left align header, mission statement, and CTA. Especially because you have a picture in your hero.
Also use some sort of graphic which represents your mission statement rather than your profile.
Tell me how your template has helped others. I believe testimonials will help me to decide if I want to signup to get the template.
Also, is the template free?

The spacing, placement, are all very haphazard.

Your call to action button is unclear. Remove the SME and plain-English say what is happening on that submit button. Th text above it should entice action, not confuse the reader.

That's as far as I made it. IMO just hire designer or grab a template to start from.

Thanks for the comments everyone, very helpful!

Split the content up a bit, I got the feeling of not knowing where to look. Try and add some images, some dividers and accreditations.

Not sure what the offer is. A book, consultation? But, I'm not a developer so I may not be your target audience.

Hi, I like that it's a clean and simple design. Having said that, there's a lot of text on the landing page cluttering the site's simplicity and it's message. If the text is arranged in nice and presentable format like in cards along with icons or try to avoid writing everything on the landing page and just let the people know what problem you are trying to solve.