Creativebutlers.com is looking for feedback
Hi Everyone,
Will appreciate your comments on one of my landing pages for a specific audience: https://creativebutlers.com/preregistration/contentcreators/
my main website is: creativebutlers.com
I just recently launched to acquire beta users.
Is the value proposition clear enough? What would you add/change/improve?
Thanks in advance!
Hi Aaron! Overall is pretty and well polished! Congrats on your launching! I know how hard it can be :) Some ideas to help you improve the page:
-It took a really long time to load here. More than usual.
Thanks! dang it's so easy to conceptualized but building and executing things sure ain't easy!
RE: "Our Amazing Work" - I agree, this is better coming from the clients instead of us saying this.
RE: site load time - yeah, i almost forgot this to follow up with my developer. The site is not yet optimized and is really taking too long to load.
Thank you so much for your input! appreciate it! @simonpaix
May be my internet connection but the site was very slow. Service is clear, unique value prop is not. Your heading is very long, could you try to shorten it? There is a lot going on on the page as well. Your heading provides more info than your subheading as well. What web designers have told me is that your heading is there to just grab attention, subheading is there to lock them in. Give what makes you unique (your biggest benefit) in the heading and your value prop in the subheading. I hope that helps! I'll check back later.
Yes, i am well aware of the site being very slow to load. I should have taken care of that early on.
RE: heading very long. - Makes sense! this can be shorten without compromising clarity.
RE: heading and subheading. - This is new to me, i'll try it out swaping value prop in the subheading instead.
Thank you so much for your input and taking time to review our site! @DrGoodfunk
Send a reply when it is updated and I will take another look. :-)