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Error Tracking Platform for creators.

by Víktor

Hello everyone,

Design and copy aren't my strongest abilities, any help is well appreciated.

Thanks

Víktor's avatarVíktor
on May 4, 2022
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    The design looks neat, but I still didn't get what is error monitoring platform for saas creators. If you target non-tech-savvy creators like me, than this page has too many unclear words. You may DM me on twitter so I help you make a better copy.

    ps simple pricing and encypted data won't inspire anyone to sign up

    Denis_Shatalin's avatar Denis_Shatalin
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    4 years ago
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      This!

      I read your hero twice, and still couldn't get it. Your hero should explain your value proposition as clear as possible, otherwise people will leave.

      ItsKev's avatar ItsKev
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      4 years ago
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        Thanks, both for your help, the first version was most about the general design than the copy, but I'm working in a new version following your advices.

        Really appreciated.

        Víktor's avatar Víktor
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        4 years ago
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