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Feedback for page needed

https://instantplan.app/

Please let me know what you think about the landing page. Thank you!

submitted this linkon February 17, 2023
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    Around where you introduce the features with an accompanying video: "Plan days in one click" + "Tasks inside your Calendar" + "Intelligent Time Tracker", the video size can be longer.

    You can solve this by adding a silder where your end user goes to the next feature set.

    (i.e. your end user sees the description for "Tasks insider your Calendar" and "Intelligent Time Tracker" one at a time so you don't have to "make the video larger".)

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      Thank you very much! I agree that videos are bad quality and resolution and will fix it in my next iteration on the landing page!

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        Everyone makes mistakes.

        Just chock it up to tomorrow's updates.

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    I like the over the fold area, it seems fairly clear what this product is. The logo is a bit generic but looks alright.

    It's not really clear what is happening in the screen capture video. I see a mouse cursor moving and clicking stuff, but no idea what is going on.

    The pitch under the video is too long and after reading it, it reads like you are trying a bit too hard.

    The screenshots in the next area are so tiny, I cannot make out much anything what is shown. If you show small screenshots, please make them clickable so I can click to see the entire screenshot in full size.

    Speaking of clickable, it's not super clear one can click those three different sections to show up a new screenshot.

    The "plan days in one click" is showing a video with many clicks going on. That doesn't really work well with your pitch. If you pitch "one click", then you should show a video that shows exactly that: one click.

    I like the idea of comparing the old way versus your solution, but again this seems a bit wordy.

    The way the pricing is laid out now tells me that the free plan has full privacy because my data doesn't leave the device, but then the paid tiers imply that they are no longer private. This doesn't really make me want to give you money if you imply that paying you makes me lose on privacy. You should perhaps reconsider this wording.

    In the pricing area, the entire box of the price tier should be clickable.

    The copyright reads 2022. For many people, this is a sign that the service is not up to date and no longer being developed.

    For me, the main problem I see with this landing page is that I hear a lot of pitch about how this is amazing, but I cannot really see the product. There are videos (that are a bit confusing to follow) and there are screenshots (which are too small), but what I would really like to see is a Live Demo. One button to click to see some kind of demo view of the app with some real looking data that I can edit to see how it all feels like and works. That would sell me this product better.

    Overall, I think this is a pretty good landing page.

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      Thank you very much!