Feedback on Book Pre-Order Copy

Hi everyone,

At ProsperCircle.org, we have been helping several people with resume reviews.

Recently, I started working on a Resume playbook and created a landing page for pre-ordering the playbook.

Would love your feedback on copy, design, anything else. Here is the link:

https://www.prospercircle.org/resume-secrets

I'm a fan of Russel Brunson and what he has done with ClickFunnels. Some of the copy elements are borrowed from his work.

Thanks,

on November 11, 2020

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You have a few minor spelling issues: https://app.pagewatch.dev/d117255639698c552a36d5d4bc90c2597807f046/dashboard

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Some feedback:
1. Page looks very busy with too much text and no images. At a first glance, without reading anything, I don't even know what you are selling.
2. Title "Resume Secrets" doesn't mean anything.
3. I like your subtitle "The Confidential Playbook to Build an Irresistible Resume and Get More Interviews.". This should be the page title instead.
4. I am not sure if you are focussing on any vertical, for e.g. developers, architects, finance professionals. If you are, you should mention that in the page title.
5. I am not sure what you mean by a playbook. Is it an e-book or a hardcopy book?
6. I like that you have stated the problem that your customers face very explicitly: (1) Do you want more job interviews, and (2) Are you tied of applying for jobs and not hearing back?
7. I would expect to see some testimonials.
neeravbm

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  Thanks for the feedback. This is very helpful. I'm making changes.
  
  Salil Sethi
  
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Hey! Here's couple comments for you:

https://app.usebubbles.com/eJcWtvMgqJNZZUtbT1zh65/comments-on-prospercircle-org/

Iiro

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  Thank you so much. Very helpful.
  
  Salil Sethi
  
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