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Feedback on Landing Page

Hey Fellow IH Peeps,

Would love to get your thoughts on this landing page before I connect it to my real URL. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated. While you're at it, if you can let me know what your thoughts are on the platform I'm looking to launch that would be awesome too. Thanks and feel free to be as brutal as you'd like.

on January 28, 2022
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    Here are some of the points to consider:

    • Change the 3D character to a 2D illustration.

    • Use a short CTA like "Sign Up" or "Get Started"

    • Consider changing your font.

    • Have a one liner tagline like "Learn Blockchain from Industry Experts" and the describe it using a couple of lines. We have done something similar on sociomata.com (our product landing page)

    I wish you good luck for this project.

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      Thank you. This is very helpful.

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    Hi!

    I like the modern 3d illustration and overall minimalism. I think you should pay more attention to your copy though.

    You might look into this amazing guide to get a lot of inspiration on landing page copy and layout. I just found it a couple of weeks ago, and it's been a revelation.

    I'd like to quote it:

    1/ Explain the value you provide (title)
    2/ Explain how you'll create it (subtitle)
    3/ Let the user visualize it (visual)
    4/ Make it believable (social proof)
    5/ Make taking the next step easy (CTA)

    Also, perhaps it would look even better if you match the color of CTA to the color of the heading?

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      This helps a lot. Thank you.

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    To be brutally honest (as requested ;), I have no idea what this is? The design is fine but you need an H1 which tells me what it is. You have a few seconds to prevent people from closing the browser tab and get their attention, and I would have to think about what this does.

    My suggestions would be:

    • An H1 which says exactly what it is (the way you would describe it to a friend, in 5-10 words)

    • the subtitle: a bit more specific please. Who are the "users"? am I the target audience? Is this for teachers, programmers, crypto people?

    • Call to action: I don't know what "instructor sign up" means. Does that mean I sign up to become an instructor? Perhaps this becomes more clear if your H1 and subtitle are more specific.

    Hope that helps

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      Thank you for being brutally honest. Your input is very helpful.

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    Have a real header instead of your company name

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      Sorry. I'm not a developer so I'm not sure what you mean by real header.