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Feedback on landing page

https://personizer.launchaco.com/

Any thoughts on improvements? It's only a design layout, the email box not working.
https://personizer.launchaco.com/

submitted this linkon July 19, 2019
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    My first impressions

    • Nothing drew my eye when the page loaded, first reaction about the page was 'meh'
    • Focus on the pain you solve, not features/functionality. Maybe something like 'Fully working CRM in seconds' or 'All of your past customer data/interactions organized in seconds' (guessing a bit here)
    • But I have an iPhone...
    • What about when I bring in someone else to help with xyz?

    Regardless of my grumpy first reactions, I find myself wondering if it would be useful for me. I think you are on the right track. As a potential user I want to see how it solves my pain, not just hear about its features and have to figure out how that would solve the problems I have.

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    I got the idea instantly. My only point of constructive feedback is that those pink checkmarks look red and lead my trained brain to think those are things you don't do or offer. I'd switch them to green or a non-redish color.

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      Yeah I couldnt see anyway to change the colours from the red in the site settings, so will change them when moving it across to live website.

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    I first saw "prisoner"
    Secondly, your site hurt my eyes :((
    5-second test failed :(((
    sorry

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      Well I think we see what we want to see. Not much I can do about that.
      The name Personizer is a portmandeou of Personal Organizer.
      What did you see when you first saw the word Google... Giggle?
      Do you think I should change the product name to alleviate the 50% of your feedback criticism?

      I couldnt see anyway to change the colours from the red in the site settings, so will change them when moving it across to live website.