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Feedback on landing page (👍 or 👎)

by Shawn Razek

Hi All --

I just launched a new landing page and would like feedback from the community!

We're ramping up for a public beta. Right now, it is about generating leads and getting feedback.

Overall, our goal is to make finding information in the workplace easily accessible and consumable. Our goal is to make the product easy to set-up and integrate into a user's workflow.

Ultimately, we want teams and companies to adopt the product. We know there will be/are privacy and security concerns, so depending on individual/company the sales motion will differ.

https://www.xobalabs.com

Thank you in advance!

Shawn Razek's avatarShawn Razek
on April 20, 2020
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    Hey Shawn,

    I like that your landing page is short and to-the-point. A few points of feedback...

    • "A search bar for all of your work applications." This is more what the app does, rather than why I should care about it. I'd try to hone in more on the problem you're solving in the h1.
    • Related, it wasn't until my second read-through that I caught the "you can take direct action" piece. That seems like an important feature that I'd highlight more up-front.
    • The logo is a bit blurry on my hi-res display.
    • It's not super clear where the app works. In the browser? A desktop app?

    Hope that helps!

    jstayton's avatar jstayton
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      Thanks for the feedback!

      • Yes, I am trying to find the right 'tagline'. Whenever I talk about the product, I always start with the 'why'... I should do the same on the website.
      • Full transparency, we're finalizing the 'actions' features right now. Once we have clarity, I'll make sure to highlight them more
      • Looking into that now
      • Didn't think to mention that! I'll add something around that (It is a web app currently)
      Shawn Razek's avatar Shawn Razek
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      6 years ago
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