Feedback on my Productize service - for AI & Tech startups

The over the fold area looks visually boring with almost no colors and the main pitch which doesn't really tell what is your product. It's too vague.

I'm not sure what I think about the animated logo. It doesn't seem to provide any value to me. Only pulling my eyes up there every time the animation loops.

After the "See all plans" button there are some photos that I cannot click or scroll, and I have no idea what these are. Did you do these products? If so, this is a very awkward way to show your portfolio.

The animated icons in the "subscription service for you" look awkward and just make it more difficult for me to read your texts with these random things moving around all the time. I would much rather see static, high quality colorful icons than these animated, dull black and gray icons.

At this point, the pitch is still very vague. "Subscribe and let's discover the journey for your brand." - I have still no idea what you are talking about.

In the "Brands we've built" area I would like to click these things to see more. But I can't. Also, all these are again in black and gray. Did you know, that using colors doesn't actually cost anything extra?

In the benefits section I finally start to understand what you are pitching: you offer graphical designs for me, for a subscription based fee. This took way too long to understand.

Again, the flashing and moving black and gray icons look dull and distracting at the same time.

The computer renders of mobile phones with faked screenshots on them look cheap and not impressive at all.

I don't understand your pricing model at all. I can choose between paying you $2500 per month, $2100 every quarter or $1800 every year? And each tier has basically the same perks? I don't get this at all.

If you are pitching for me to pay you thousands of dollars for design work - and I do hire a lot of designers all the time - I would expect your website to look a lot better than this. Right now, it doesn't look bad per se, but it's not looking nearly as good as it should at the price points you are asking.

Also, there is no information about you. Who are you? Is this one dude with a MacBook or is this a team sitting in some office somewhere? I have no idea. When I hire people, I like to know who I am working with.

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The over the fold area looks visually boring with almost no colors and the main pitch which doesn't really tell what is your product. It's too vague.

I'm not sure what I think about the animated logo. It doesn't seem to provide any value to me. Only pulling my eyes up there every time the animation loops.

After the "See all plans" button there are some photos that I cannot click or scroll, and I have no idea what these are. Did you do these products? If so, this is a very awkward way to show your portfolio.

The animated icons in the "subscription service for you" look awkward and just make it more difficult for me to read your texts with these random things moving around all the time. I would much rather see static, high quality colorful icons than these animated, dull black and gray icons.

At this point, the pitch is still very vague. "Subscribe and let's discover the journey for your brand." - I have still no idea what you are talking about.

In the "Brands we've built" area I would like to click these things to see more. But I can't. Also, all these are again in black and gray. Did you know, that using colors doesn't actually cost anything extra?

In the benefits section I finally start to understand what you are pitching: you offer graphical designs for me, for a subscription based fee. This took way too long to understand.

Again, the flashing and moving black and gray icons look dull and distracting at the same time.

The computer renders of mobile phones with faked screenshots on them look cheap and not impressive at all.

I don't understand your pricing model at all. I can choose between paying you $2500 per month, $2100 every quarter or $1800 every year? And each tier has basically the same perks? I don't get this at all.

If you are pitching for me to pay you thousands of dollars for design work - and I do hire a lot of designers all the time - I would expect your website to look a lot better than this. Right now, it doesn't look bad per se, but it's not looking nearly as good as it should at the price points you are asking.

Also, there is no information about you. Who are you? Is this one dude with a MacBook or is this a team sitting in some office somewhere? I have no idea. When I hire people, I like to know who I am working with.

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