I posted the original design + copy for https://pivalink.com some time ago here and got lots of great feedback. I've since changed most of the copy and product images to better align with that previous feedback. I would love any feedback on the latest version!
Why not ask it directly to your audience via A/B testing and see which copy are performing the best among your targeted audience?
I've recently posted this article explaining how I achieve 60% improvement on my landing page conversion. Hope this helps!
https://howuku.com/blog/what-i-learn-from-a-b-testing-beginner/
Nice. I understand exactly what it is by the headline and images. Great job!
Awesome, thank you!
This looks really polished, so well done! I have no feedback on the site, as I can't see anything wrong with it. I've thought a few times about building one of these, but was always busy building something else.
My question is around the name. What made you decide on that name? What is a "piva"? I pronounce it "pee-vuh" and my honest feedback is it doesn't sound good to me, nor does it have any meaning to me. I don't mean to just put down the name... naming things is hard. Just trying to provide honest feedback. It is nice and short, so that part is awesome! I'm sure the name is good enough to succeed. Just a lil feedback.
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Really helpful feedback, thank you!