First Version. Give me some Feedback! www.greenship.io
First version of the site using carrd.io
Because i don't have any physical mockups or renderings yet the site is pretty bare.All feedback on the route I'm taking is welcome!
Next features and containers to be added will include.
-Flow chart cycle (how it works)
-Renderings of physical products
Thanks
-Pete
Greenship
The first email input should be more visible. The same goes for the button in the ending form. I don't like the first and the third images. Design should increase conversions before looking good and those images don't help you reach that goal. Also, the hero heading is too generic. People won't scroll down. Say what you do clearly in the heading and subheading. No slogans, just what you do and how.
Great points. Thanks for the feedback.
Just created a "how it works" flow, and will hopefully have renderings and mockups to consume the image space, instead of the generic images.