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Flow Phantom- upsells built in Webflow

Hello everyone,

I'd love to get feedback on my new project Flow Phantom . The main goal of this landing page/demo is to get people to sign up for the private alpha. Let me know all the mistakes I've made! Thanks in advance.

https://www.flowphantom.com/

on August 18, 2020
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    1. Theme and color - very well done 👍
    2. Copy - little bit wordy, trim words. One technique I've learned while writing is to speak out loud your copy and then see what sounds right or not to your mind.
    3. What is missing - the "value" of your product - why should I be buying versus the current problem/challenges.

    All the best!

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      Talking out loud - great advice! Thanks for the feedback

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    • The demo adding a product doesn't show me anything interesting. Also clicking on products seems super slow (page load + animations..) and "stuck" as there are no details if I don't scroll down.
    • The big top right image could/should convey more.. out of context my best guess would be that your building webstore for pharmacies.
    • The main title, both design and text should be reworked
      "Create irresistible one-click upsells directly in the Webflow designer"
      ** irresistible - is the problem most people are already creating one-click upsells which interest no one, and your solving that?
      ** Webflow designer - is webflow commonly used as ecommerce shop?
    • "Choose the first and only one-click post purchase upsell plugin for Webflow"
      If it's the only, do I really choose? does the fact that it's first make it better for me to use?
    • The 3 image block again the images, I'm not sure convey what you want, one is a customer hesitating with his c.c. the 3rd, a user is sad.
    • I still don't get the demo down either, unless you actually want me to complete a full transaction putting my email and address in... if so rather have default and not make me fill or better is to replace with animated gif/video showing the process, it's to much for just a landing page view
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      Wow appreciate the detail, thank you so much!

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    I'm using the same flow app for my store. Currently I'm running a store of Frankincense Resin Retailer that hosted on WordPress, you can see here https://frankincensedirect.com/

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    Wonderful color scheme. @andrew_bass

    It takes a while to load the content, maybe my issue. But you might wanna check sitespeed too :)

    I'm also in the middle of improving my site. Would be fantastic to hear your feedback

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      Well I did buy a template - design looked nice but wow is the page speed awful. Thanks for the heads up. I'm happy to take a look. Where should I post my feedback ( I assume you'd rather not have it on my thread ) .