Generated Personalised CVs

Hey there, I recorded a quick Landing Page audit: https://share.vidyard.com/watch/UaqJcNthBaS8hg19ybxqDv?

Here is the text version as well:

First screen

"Customize Your CV For Every Job Application"

This is the “how” of your offer. But what’s the benefit?

Save time?
Land more job interviews?
Get hired for better roles?

Headline idea: Land more job interviews with customized CVs
Subheadline: Save time and increase your job application response rates by up to 50% with a custom resume based on the job description.

Logo sections: ??? What do these logo means?

Add a “problem acknowledging” section after the first screen

You need your copywriter to do some research, but you can go with something easy like:

Section headline: You sent 50 job applications and got no replies back. We know… it sucks!

Body: Does applying for jobs feel like a full-time job? Compose slashes your time to customize CVs for each role you apply for, so you can land more interviews, and stress less.

Pricing tab:

$2.99 is too low. Also, the monthly structure is not ideal for this business imo. Because they’ll spend 2-3 months looking for jobs. Then they don’t need it anymore. Better go with a one-time purchase, like $49.

Business plan: You never talked about how your product is helpful for business in the landing page. So it's a bit of a random element. Consider creating a landing page specific for businesses.

Email forms:
After I submit my email, I don’t know what’s next. Should I check my inbox? What’s going to happen? Manage expectations.

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Nice design, colors and UI.

I find the text near the end of Business pricing hard to read. The contrast could improve.

Add the "lang" attribute to the <html> tag.

Hacker0x20

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3 years ago
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Hey there, I recorded a quick Landing Page audit: https://share.vidyard.com/watch/UaqJcNthBaS8hg19ybxqDv?

Here is the text version as well:
1. First screen
"Customize Your CV For Every Job Application"

This is the “how” of your offer. But what’s the benefit?

Save time?
Land more job interviews?
Get hired for better roles?

Headline idea: Land more job interviews with customized CVs
Subheadline: Save time and increase your job application response rates by up to 50% with a custom resume based on the job description.

Logo sections: ??? What do these logo means?

Add a “problem acknowledging” section after the first screen

You need your copywriter to do some research, but you can go with something easy like:

Section headline: You sent 50 job applications and got no replies back. We know… it sucks!

Body: Does applying for jobs feel like a full-time job? Compose slashes your time to customize CVs for each role you apply for, so you can land more interviews, and stress less.

Pricing tab:

$2.99 is too low. Also, the monthly structure is not ideal for this business imo. Because they’ll spend 2-3 months looking for jobs. Then they don’t need it anymore. Better go with a one-time purchase, like $49.

Business plan: You never talked about how your product is helpful for business in the landing page. So it's a bit of a random element. Consider creating a landing page specific for businesses.

Email forms:
After I submit my email, I don’t know what’s next. Should I check my inbox? What’s going to happen? Manage expectations.
simon27

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3 years ago
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