Get constructive feedback on your landing page from a professional web designer
Hi guys đ Since I love Saas and this startup community, I was thinking that I could be somehow helpful.
Link your project in the comments and I will try my best to give you some constructive feedback (design-wise) đ Excited to see your projects!
Hey Tom,
Thanks for that đ
This is a very simple one for our upcoming product but Iâm very curious how you see it.
https://raport.pro
Hi Wojtek, awesome to see another Poland brother in this community! :)
So my first feeling when I come to the landing page is that everything kinda blends in together. It is very simple, and I dig that but I think you could make the CTA more "enjoyable" to look at. You should definitely make it different somehow - putting it in a light blue box with opacity 10% - which will be ultimately working as a CTA + on top of that it would be easy optimized for mobile. It's hard to explain over text but I think you get the idea.
Next thing, I noticed that you guys mention in point 2 - "one beautiful dashboard".. And my questions is, why not show it then? I see there are 3 small analytics boxes - but I feel like they are only a part of the whole dashboard or no?
I dig the idea to make it very simple - especially for preselling - but I do believe that you could have like 2 sections in a form of a landing page. Also, not having a menu is kinda throwing me off - I understand that you don't need it but for the sake of design I would add to the right corner "Home" - "Contact" - "Our mission" - "CTA"
To really mean what I meant - I've put together a simple "sketch" here: https://imgur.com/a/M7uxiLj
Hope that helps :)
Oh, you're Slovakian! Great to meet you man!
Wow, you are really good at it, thank you for this great feedback and for that sketch! We need to make those changes for sure. I especially like that upgraded call-to-action for email input. It catches an eye.
Exactly :) There are more ways to do it - that's for sure. It was just an initial idea you guys can expand on.
But honestly, I think you guys are pretty much ready to start pre-selling though :) I don't know how people will end up on that page - but if it's from like 1 on 1 conversations, they will convert anyways.
Actually Iâm trying to bring people from more âmassiveâ sources like Reddit, Product Hunt and Indie Hackers. We even invested in upcoming product page on PH.
My goal is 100 signups for wait list so I have plenty of work to do. But thank you for your help! I will recommend you as web designer for sure đ
I wish you all the best with the project! :)
Thank you!