I'm in the process of rolling out Gived.Org with a few users - and I'd love some feedback on the landing page.
The primary purpose of the landing page is to provide some credibility, rather than drive customers.
What do you think Gived.Org does/is?
Do you trust it?
Many thanks 💖
can you send me a how to implement video? I'm interested .. . .
Hi there, I'd love to get you on-boarded. It's currently a manual process.
Perhaps you could email me and we could get you setup?
joe@gived.org
Hey Joseph,
To be honest your landing page is very confusing, futuristic crowdfunding for what? It really doesn't say much. It looks like it's similar to patreon? "Turn followers into subscribers" kind of give me that vibe. I think "Earn revenue from your true fans" or something like that would be better. Try this: Who is this for? What problem does it solves? Why I want your product? - answer these three questions. I am happy to provide feedback, you should come with better copy from those questions alone.
Thanks for this feedback, really appreciate it.
I'll re-word the page and get back to you!
Maybe move the "demo" "updates" "login" links to the top navigation menu so people can see the platform in action easier?
Thanks for this - it's a nice idea :)
Hi, the main idea is clear - crowdfunding. Thats it. Futuristic? What does it mean? How do you differ yourself from a million of services like that?
Thanks for your feedback :)
I suppose that means the features section and demo isn't good at showing that.
I'll have a think about how I can re-frame it :)
I'd suggest adding more copy to the LP. Better communicate the idea behind your company and I'd suggest providing better snapshots.
Thanks :) I'll have a think about what to put on there
Hey landing page looks pretty good! In the future or if you still are looking for some designer quality feedback on your designs I'd love to help you out! I recently started a design feedback website called Pastryy, we can provide designer quality feedback on your logos, websites and mobile app designs.
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