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by Toul Cranmer

Hi, I have recently redone my website; https://resumesfortech.com, and am looking for feedback on the copy. Right now I am most concerned with the offer being communicated, if that is clear then I would like some help on the improvement of the copy for conversion.

Toul Cranmer's avatarToul Cranmer
on May 25, 2020
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    • No data points: How many successful ones, how much salary increase, how much ..something
    • No process explained: over a phone call? chat? email? platform? video? pigeon-message? smoke sign?
    • Testimonials look fake
    • Visually this looks like a website for writers, are you targeting the right crowd using an old typewriter? Probably not? This reminds me more of a cool service for oldschool writers in empty diners
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      Thanks appreciate the feedback!

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