Have any feedback? I'll promptly return the favor.

Hey y'all,

UPDATED:
I've updated my landing page based on some nice feedback. Happy to keep the momentum going if there are any other pieces of wisdom!

https://talent-manage.bubbleapps.io/

OUTDATED:
This is my second attempt at a landing page for this new project.

DISCLAIMER: I'm an engineer - a tinkerer. I'm not a designer, and I'm trying to improve my business acumen on the job. So, I'm still trying to figure out how to effectively communicate the value proposition.

1. Any feedback relative to design improvements?
2. Does the value proposition make sense? How can it be improved?

Thanks! Let me know if I can help you in any way!