Help me choose the best headline (Vote) 👇
Do we like any of these headlines for the above the fold on WorkbreakHQ.com?
👉Suggestions welcome in the comments.
👇Vote Below.
A. Remote Team Building Just Got Easy
B. Create Zoom-Based Team Building Events in Seconds
C. Automate Your Remote Team Building Activities
D. Build great work relationships over Zoom in minutes
Still trying to figure out my messaging, thanks in advance.
"automate your team building" is closer...
"Team Building" I think is a useful part of the headline, but I don't think "easy" "in seconds" are enough...
In my opinion, the product should have a unique selling point that you hammer on...
Exactly what is the team building method?
How do you prove it works?
How much fun are people having using it?
For me, as a customer, I would want to see screenshots of the actual team building in action, some quotes for satisfied ongoing users that posted about it in their credible social media presence, and most important, more information about the actual "content" of what you mean by team building? Is it games? What are they? Discussion prompts? Show some examples?
Instead of one shot showing "bring your pet to zoom", I would like to see at least 3 different shots... Also, many people do not have or like pets.
I voted B. it tells me exactly in 2 seconds what your platform is about.
Thanks for the feedback and taking the time, really appreciate it.