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Help me optimize my landing page.

So over the last few weeks, I have had this minuscule problem that's kinda been making me bash my head against the wall and its got to do with the wording on my landing page.

The Problem

  • I feel the wording I currently have is very vague and doesn't articulate what the actual niche of my newsletter covers.
  • Not impactful enough

So I have written 3 varients of the copy for my landing page. A, B and C.

A - Get the weekly email that keeps founders up tp date with the latest and most interesting projects being created on the internet.

B - Get the weekly email that keeps founders up to date with emerging SaaS, hot podcasts and actionable resources from the internet.

C - Get the weekly email that keeps founders up to date with emerging SaaS, hot podcasts and actionable resources from other founders.

Let me know which one you prefer. Any suggestions and feedback would be greatly appreciated.

on June 24, 2020
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    "emerging creations" is extremely vague, I 'd go with B or C.

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    Out of the 3 mentioned I would probably go with B