Hi everyone! Would love some feedback.

A couple of areas for improvement

• There's a lot of information, and probably too much text in this landing page. Consider having just your H1 (Life is too short...) above the fold, and make the rest of the bullet points come later
• The key action you want people to take is to request chat, and it takes a lot of scrolling to get there
• It would be beneficial to have some "proofs" whether that's testimonials of other clients, or even showing yourself in a large speaking arena (confirm you know what you're talking about)

I loved the 4 bullet point at the first page: "Learn to love the sound of your own voice." really talked to me.

Overall, it's clear what you do and if I have that problem I might turn to you. One thing that popped in to my mind is that a nice short INTRO video would be cool which would plant in my mind the understanding "OK, Miranda clearly knows this stuff." and if it would have some nice memorable joke - even better. :)

Good luck 🙌

I agree with @diana, for something like coaching, a personal photo and personal connection with your audience might be a good idea.

At first the large, white top banner annoyed me. But, it made me actually read it rather than scroll past so maybe that's a good thing.

Finally, I'm wondering if "book a consult" is the best call to action. My gut reaction, being anti-sales, is that it'll just be a sales phone call. I almost wonder about a 5-point list/questions along the lines of "Public Speaking Methods is right for you if...". Essentially a do-it-yourself checklist rather than a phone consult. You could also use something like joonbot.com (another IH project) to build an automated chatbot to that goes through the "is it right for you" checklist.

Not sure if that makes sense but hope it helps,

It looks good, it gets to the point & the call to action is clear. The only thing I would say is perhaps consider a photo of yourself at the top instead of the stock photo. It would encourage trust.