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How can I make this landing page better?
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Oleg B
https://falcon9.co
Hello, this site is more like a documentation site. I think Landing pages should be more flashy. I recommend that you build it completely from scratch with a slightly more visual and interesting color palette.
yeah, I used a mkdocs constructor to build it. I found it easy to use when creating this landing page. Thanks for the feedback. I guess that makes sense to make it easier to understand what's product about.
From Oleg to Oleg
There's a lot to improve here. Sorry for the tough love.
Start with copywriting. At first glance, there are some grammatical errors and unstructured sentences.
I believe you offer a landing page template for people that make apps. How about just stating that.
If you can spare 10 min check this resource for structuring a landing page, and your product offering.
https://www.julian.com/guide/growth/landing-pages
Good luck
Thank you for this feedback :) I guess writing isn't my strong side :D
I tried to change the text a bit (it's not a micro landing pages, but App Templates)