I really need some feedback on refreshed landing page
I started building Windows client for my cloud-free CRM ecosystem and wanted to reflect this on the web site. I refreshed the landing page.
Can you viit my refreshed landing page:
https://produktyf.com/default.aspx
(there are other pages but I only refreshed landing page, will work on others next).
If you were interested in a CRM system, would you consider this? Is everything clear to you? How can I improve?
Feedback much appreciated - I can return favour by reviewing your landing page.
The first thing I notice is your headline.
I'll be a little tough here. It makes no sense for me looking for a CRM system.
I don't know your target group, but the usual people looking for a CRM system have no idea what "Run your business without the cloud!" means.
I think you should turn it around and state an issue your product is solving. Something like: "Looking to sell more? Use Produktyf", or "Tired of the managing aspect of sales? Let Prodktyf take care of it".
I think it's super important you take all the tech out of your headline and the first section of text.
In your text section, you're mentioning three different target groups:
I would make a landing page for each of these as they have different needs. An individual doesn't care about collaboration features, whereas it's super important for teams.
I would remove the accordion and write it out as sections.
The last thing your CTAs need to be a lot more visible. Right now, it's difficult figuring out where to press. Make your CTAs actionable.
Examples:
Start managing your clients
Save time, Sell more
Start free trial
I hope it gives you something to work with. Happy hunting 🚀
I really appreciate your feedback! Thank you!