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Just updated my main project landing page!. Go ahed and ROAST it!

https://legendsverse.com
submitted this linkon September 10, 2021
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    • Making the text thicker in the header image might also help!
    • Consider putting your About blurb in a separate page (can be in the site links at the bottom) as opposed to a standalone paragraph. I was a bit confused when I got there abt what to do/click.
    • Think the value props could be bit clearer, the third one that you present seems to offer a lot of value to me as a non-collector, but I'd try and get user feedback on how exactly to line those up.
    • In the Marvel legends value prop section you might wanna move the + signs to the right of the numbers.
    • Bumping your testimonial above the longer feature list also feels higher info + trust building than otherwise.

    If you haven't read it yet someone sent me this two weeks ago when I put up my landing and I found it helpful to read and understand if you haven't come across it (tho feedback has always been the best): https://www.julian.com/guide/growth/landing-pages

    Previously I've worked as a contractor on a similar project with FunkoPops and other collectibles (helped write the scrapers, not sure if it ever got off the ground) so this is really cool to see as a fully realized thing!

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      Hey, thanks a lot I already went ahead and made some of the changes you proposed. Thank you. Will take a look at that link you shared.

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    Hey Alejandro, the page is an awesome starting point. Congrats 👏

    Some thoughts:

    • There is a lot going on in the header image and the text is not 100% white and therefore it's quite hard to read. You should either increase the text opacity, or switch the image IMO.
    • They gray feature-items grid section looks a bit "boring" (everyone will probably just skip about it). You should think about using different icons for each feature item :)
    • The FAQ section looks very imbalanced / not-symmetric. Add some items or shift the existing items around a bit

    Good luck with your project 🍀

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      Hey Dennis, thanks a lot, I thought the same about the hero image, but was too lazy to do something about it, The features were originally red, but it was very exhausting to read, so I switched it to gray, probably will make the background white and try something else.

      Will take a look at the FAQ.

      Thanks a lot for your input!