Landing Page Feedback!!
Hi!
I've recently launched the landing page for my startup, and any feedback would be greatly appreciated! What I'm worried about is that the purpose of the app might not be fully clear to visitors. Here's the page: https://hyphora.org/
Best Regards,
Manish
Hi Manish, Here is a video with my feedback on your site https://www.loom.com/share/532b22cace6749f5b431f66493bcd370
Hi Nathan, thank you so much for the insightful and detailed response, we greatly appreciate it! I will make sure to make those fixes.
You're welcome. Let me know if you need additional feedback
Hi Manish,
the part "hyphora is a collaborative platform that allows students to create, share, and discover resources and extracurricular opportunities." is little bit difficult to read at first glance as its not shown in proper manner, it would be nice to show it in the middle.
something like this website did in their headline: https://collect.chat/
check out there headline, easy to read.
Hi @Manish_, great job with this. I like you how showed the Airtable database for students to browse. It sells the idea that you have quality opportunities.
One suggestion is to explain how this is better than the alternative? How is your site better than university job boards, LinkedIn jobs, or similar job sites?
Some examples of language that you may use are:
"Filter for the industry and job-type more easily than you can using [competitor]."
"Hyphora aggregates jobs from [competitor], [competitor], [competitor], so you don't have to."
"Unlike [competitor], which only offers job listings, Hyphora helps you find educational summer programs and academic resources such as books and courses -- so you can prepare yourself for the jobs you want."
Use words such as "more easily" "better than" "faster than" in order to explain how you're different from the alternative.
Words such as "unlike ____, Hyphora ___" can do the same.
@Manish_, if you want to get more tips like these, then I think you'll like my website, SplashPad. SplashPad helps you write marketing language that attracts attention and sells your ideas by suggesting words while you write. Visit https:/getsplashpad.com.
Good luck with Hyphora. It's great for the world.