Sign inJoin
4
5 Comments

Landing page refactoring with seed users

by Hopper Gee

I launched MonthCamp last week.

In my effort to make this product, I was hoping to get a lot of feedback from users. But it seems the response was very low. I am disappointed by this lack of interest in my work.

Fortunately, I still got some seed users.

The most feedback problem is that my landing page is not easy to understand. They don't know what I'm trying to build.

I took 2 days to communicate to those seed users. Then, the below land page cames out.

Current:

Previous:

What do you guys think about this land page?

Hopper Gee's avatarHopper Gee
on November 8, 2021
Say something nice to hoppergee…
Post Comment
  1. 2

    I think the header animation/GIF is already a step in the right direction. However, I think a short explanatory video of how a community operates will make a difference.

    Also, when I click on "Get Started Now," I get to a list of communities, and when I click on one, I get to the same page, but with a different copy. That isn't very clear. I would have thought it would show me the community or at the next step of the process.

    It also took me a while to figure out the icon on the top of the screen, which brought me to the globe page. Which, if I would guess, is the main page of a community?

    I like the UI. It's clean! But I think you can improve upon the UX and, in particular, the onboarding.

    Feel free to reach out if you have any further questions or want to bounce some ideas of me, happy to help!

    Twan's avatar Twan
    ·
    5 years ago
    ·
    Reply
    1. 2

      Thank you for taking the time to give me such detailed feedback! You're right, my UX design is terrible. I need to redesign it and will get back to you after that.

      Hopper Gee's avatar Hopper Gee
      ·
      5 years ago
      ·
      Reply
    2. 1

      Hi, Twan, I just refactoring the whole UX of MonthCamp.
      Hope you have time to help me look at. Your advice is precious to me.

      Hopper Gee's avatar Hopper Gee
      ·
      5 years ago
      ·
      Reply
  2. 1

    I was planning on sending you a DM via Twitter, so it would be easier to start a convo about my feedback, but your DM's are closed. 😢

    The UX is a step forward in the right direction! When clicking through the pages, here are two things I thought of:

    1. Besides the "Get Started Now" button, you might want to add a button "Explore the communities" instead of underlining "community" in the header. It helps to have an "explore first" type of button in the header. I don't think many people will click on the underlined text.
    2. The "get started" page could benefit from some extra copy. Maybe you could list some benefits on the left or right of the sign-up form. Why should people sign up? That's the page to give them the final push in the back to sign-up!
    3. I think swapping the title "Monthly 10 persons groups" with the subtitle "Make a deeper connection with your community" makes more sense. The platform is about monthly ten person groups, but that's not the "why." Opening the page with "Make a deeper connection with your community" sounds a lot more exciting! Because that makes me wonder, "Why!?", "How!?", "Tell me more!"

    Hopefully, this helps! Let me know if you have any questions.

    Twan's avatar Twan
    ·
    5 years ago
    ·
    Reply
    1. 2

      Great points ! It's hard for me to come up with these without your input.

      It seems I need to think about the user's perspective more. I will work on it this week.

      Thanks again for your help.

      BTW, I just opened my Twitter DM, sorry for the inconvenience.

      Hopper Gee's avatar Hopper Gee
      ·
      5 years ago
      ·
      Reply