Let the roasting begin 🔥 - bestcourses
I'd love to get our landingpage for bestcourses.io to get roasted 🔥
We're building an online course comparison platform, aggregating more than 200,000 courses from 15+ online course providers like Udemy, Skillshare & Coursera.
Let me know what you would do differently :)
Top idea. I'd use this. can you make one for groups please? :)
There is not much wrong here, but as a LP Copywriter, the one thing I'd do differently Is have a big bold benefit. Why should i use it? I know to you it seems obvious (and it kind of is), but still if it was me, I'd assume I'm talking to a 10 year old and be more explicit about it.
Hey Nick, thank for your response!
Would something like "The easiest way to find your next online course" be more obvious to you? Or are you thinking about something completely different.
Also, what do you mean with "make one for groups"? Like, what would the best course to take as a group be, or am I misunderstanding this?
"The easiest way to find your next online course" is ok, but it's more of a feature than a benefit. It can be a little tricky to make the distinction sometimes (until you really think about it), but it's basically that a feature is something your product does, while a benefit is what a user gets (outcome). Certainly you could argue "find your next course" is an outcome, but it's not that compelling or unique (you can find your next course on UDEMY or google). My suggestion would be to begin with who you're aiming to serve, what problem you're solving for them and the benefit they get from solving that problem. Off the top of my head, i'd assume the problems you're solving might be overwhelm and time and so if someone is less overwhelmed and has more time than then the result is? They save time and headspace and so can get cracking with their learning sooner rather than later. That's your benefit. Just as an example.
Apologies for self-promotion, but i think this could help: https://landingpagehub.net/value-proposition-statement-guide-ffw-1-5-1/
As for groups, well my problem (right now in fact) is that i'm trying to find groups where i can add value (and of course get attention for my products and services), specific to my target audience (i.e where they hang out) and it's hard, because there is no central database of groups and communities.