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Looking for feedback

Hoping to get some feedback on:

https://blkbx.app/

The copy definitely needs work and I'm struggling with how to convey one of the more important aspects of the product in the 'Obscure Day to Day Emotion' section. I'm not sure how to make it more interesting and get the point across.

Any feedback on the landing page or advice for growing interest in a product that doesn't exist yet is greatly appreciated!

Thanks!

on August 20, 2020
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      Hey thanks for taking the time to do this!

      Not going to lie, it's a little strange watching the site from this perspective but I dig it haha

      I definitely gleaned some good info from this so I'll listen to it again this weekend to see what else I can take from it.

      Threw you a subscribe on YouTube as well, good luck getting to 100 and again, I appreciate your time!

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        My pleasure, I try to do this to help out folks who might feel like they're too close to their products to see how the more generic audience feels/finds things :)

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    I really like the design of the landing page. The clean black and white styling in the colour palette gives off a luxurious, high-end vibe which in general is a good thing since everyone is drawn to stuff that looks luxurious.

    I personally looked at the website on mobile.

    • I feel that the icon and text combo under “designed for everyone” would look better on mobile with the icon on top and the text below instead of trying to cramp them side by side.

    • The timing and time in graphics look really elegant and minimalist. I feel that the bar on the time in chart comes a bit too far up on mobile and leaves very little space between the two graphs. Maybe increase the spacing between the two a bit on mobile.

    Other than that a really sleek looking site with lovely mockups included on the page.

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      Thanks for taking the time to look and I really appreciate the kind words!

      • I agree and can definitely fix that section to be more mobile friendly.
      • As for the graphic I can see that now too. Definitely looks a little jarring so I'll see how cutting a bit off the last bar looks and adding some space. Also, credit where credit is due the minimal feel was inspired (aka swiped) from something I saw on twitter not too long ago: https://twitter.com/visualizevalue/status/1291381867518754816

      Thanks again!