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Need some feedback on marketing site please!

Hi,
I'm new to indehackers and this is a first attempt at a post....

Site: https://maid.tech/

We just redesigned our marketing site and I was hoping for some feedback.
We are focusing on selling simple cleaning sites with a basic CMS and other features like lead management and estimators.

Our target audience is small cleaning companies that don't have a site or have a poorly designed one.

Does the site stand out? Does it communicate clearly what we do? Any suggestions?

Thanks!

on April 5, 2022
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    Lots of great feedback here already. The only thing I would add is that I would switch the position of the "Get started" button so that it's to the left of the "Learn more" button, since "Get started" is your primary call-to-action.

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      Thanks for the feedback, @malenaohl,

      Point taken!

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    Hi, here are some quick feedback:

    • The logotype looks a little big in relation to the rest of the header
    • The header is a bit crowded.
      • 'Our work' and 'Services' sound a bit similar. The same with 'Estimator' and 'Pricing'. Perhaps they can be combined so there are fewer menu options.
      • The buttons to the right have a lot of visual weight. Perhaps the phone number and log-in can be without borders?
    • Headline
      • I don't think there should be a line break before 'at killer prices'
      • Perhaps 'killer' is a bit negative/harsh word?
      • Perhaps the headline can be a bit more succinct?
    • Preamble
      • I feel that it's a bit long
      • Hard to understand if you build custom sites or if it's a website builder
      • It's a bit on the nose to say that you don't have time to learn or money to buy. Focus on the upsides instead of the negatives of the customer
      • I wouldn't mention competitors so early. Perhaps in a comparison further down
    • Make sure that you have a 2x high resolution of the illustration. It looks blurry on my Macbook and external 27" screen with 'retina' resolution.

    Hope this helps!

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      Wow, thanks @finnstrand, very thorough and helpful. I already implemented a few changes, and will keep working at it.

      • Jordan
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    I think the site could be more quickly comprehended without the dynamic text. Just use plain text.

    And, don't use that text. Use something else. Something like " Custom websites for cleaning businesses at killer prices".

    What do you think?

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      Thanks @brandonHacker!

      I like the spirit of that header. I am going to try to think of something that is a play on words with cleaning or something. "Sites that shine at prices dirt cheap!"

      Not that though...we don't want to convey that they are cheap...

      I'll keep thinking, thanks for the feedback.