Hey Indie Hackers,
I just built the landing page for a new platform/service I am going to be launching soon.
I would love some feedback on concept and landing page layout/design only. There is no functionality at this point.
You can use the following link to both view and provide feedback on page. I threw a landing page together in Wix: https://sh.yoursitereview.com/TcB8BL8
Let me know if you have any questions. Please let me know if you also understand the concept as a whole.
I like the idea; the page could use a lot of work.
Think about who your main clientele is going to be.
If you answer these questions, it'll help you with your content & copy
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This doesn't solve a problem for me. You're only appealing to people who are looking for trained marketing professionals; but what if I don't know that's what I need?
If I am your customer, what do I want? What is the point of marketing?
What does the inspector do?
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Apply as an inspector should be somewhere else on the page, away from the main CTA.
Your main CTA could be something like:
"Get your curated list of marketing partners in minutes"
"TRY IT FREE".
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The process section is also not helpful.
Seamless is a table stake.
Focus on what is wrong with traditional job posting methods and the benefit you provide.
"Easy Job Postings"
"Post your job in 5 minutes, not hours"
"Get the perfect match"
"We connect you with a curated list of marketing pros tailored to your needs. "
The third feature is not really part of the process.
You could have a money back guarantee later to provide some more incentive. But in this section you should focus on the outcomes/benefits that your users will get.
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"The best businesses need the best team" or "Get the best team without the price tag"
"Our marketing professionals provide the expertise you need, at a fraction of the cost you'd normally pay."
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Add testimonials.
Add pricing.
Add examples of the service provided, and the results users could expect.
Add real examples of the marketing pros you would be connecting them with.
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Extremely helpful feedback! Thank you for this.
This comment was deleted 6 years ago
I appreciate that! Thank you for the feedback.