Hi All,
We are working on a new website call DigitalTreasureHunting.com. Our service will provide events where users can solve clues hidden on the World Wide Web for rewards such as cash prizes. The events can have different difficulty levels and are time limited. Check out our website. Send us any inquires or feedback at support@digitaltreasurehunting.com
Hey there, I have some suggestions. Hope my feedback doesn't come across as discouraging!
First impression: sorry to say, it makes me skeptical. "Is this a scam? Why is someone giving away money?" Not saying it's a scam, just that it needs a re-write to avoid scaring people off.
I'd separate the site headline into words.
You can use a fun script font like this but it's best not to use it for everything.
I would drop "scattered and buried" from the site title. I would drop "for anyone to join" from the tagline.
Suggestions:
"Step 1: Choose an event to join"
"Step 2: Find hidden clues on the Web"
"Step 3: Unlock further clues as you progress"
"Step 4: Be the first to find them all, and collect your reward!"
The main part of the page being a single image will give people trouble who try to read it on their phones. And it's safe to expect between 1/3 and 4/5 of visitors will first see your page on mobile, depending on where they're coming from.
Hope that helps!
Thanks Shawn for your critical review. I appreciate your feedback to make my improve the image of my product. Thanks again .