OnlyFounders... 👋🏻 Landing page critique
So I built onlyfounders.co using Framer because #nocode!
It's a landing page for a community I am building for verified tech founders. For taking the time to check it out and critique it, I will do the same to yours if you drop the link! Thanks and have a fantastic day :)
The main problem is that what you are saying is not matching your visual style. The pitch is about an exclusive club but the website doesn't look polished or exclusive.
If you want to go with a minimal look, I would remove that "founder only" - "thorough vetting" thing because it doesn't look great. Those rounded corner shapes look like buttons and overall, it doesn't look good.
Also, the site is lacking credibility. You pitch an exclusive club only for founders. So, who are you? Why should I, as a founder, join your club? How about you first wow me of yourself or some other member and that will make me want to join?
And lastly, you are collecting leads without a privacy policy. That's always very suspect and depending where you are, that could even be illegal.
This is solid feedback and I appreciate it. You bring up some really good points and I'll chew on them and see about changing up some stuff(because your suggestions make sense).
In your opinion, what do you think would make it look polished and exclusive?
When you are thinking of 'polished' and/or 'exclusive', do certain websites come to mind that you are comparing to this site?