Please roast my cold outreach email!

Hey, I am a product expert working with different clients and I run https://www.passtheproduct.io/.

Here is my typical email template for clients that need product management help.

Please roast it. any advice on how to improve would be super helpful. don't be shy :)

Email:

"Hi Jack :)

You don’t know me, but my name is Abidal and I am a product consultant from Saudi. I help startups like beema build and launch SaaS products and features that customers love!

I really think that it is about time someone digitizes and revolutionizes the insurance space. beema is taking part in that and it reminds me a lot of https://www.cuvva.com/

I wanted to get in touch about helping you as a product manager/consultant on a freelance or contract basis!

I usually work with startups in Europe remotely and I am currently based in Dubai/Berlin!

you can find more about me here https://www.linkedin.com/in/abdulla-alshahri/

and on Upwork: https://www.upwork.com/freelancers/~01722cb0eaa2d040cf

would love to jump on a quick call with you at your earliest convenience: https://cal.com/abidal/pass-the-product-intro "