Pls give feedback on my landing page
hello indies! i've just shipped a landing page via carrd - pls give me feedback on what you think of it, is the copy & design clear? Any ways I can improve it? Does it make you click on the CTA and engage with the product?
Pls don't hold back and - appreciate you :)
Hi Shounak,
It's an interesting idea.
The landing page fails the five-second test. That is because there are too many words above the fold.
What is the main measurable benefit your product would provide? Focus a headline on that in fewer than six words.
I'd be tempted to look at it if there was a free trial, but I'm not going to pay $499 for something unknown.
Hope this helps.
ah this is perfect - 5 sec failed for sure - will make these changes
what kind of a free trial offer did you have in mind?
Hey Shounak,
nice job. I think I got the idea and would be interested in your service (but I don't have the money right know ;)
The example transformations are really helpful. It would be even more convincing to include the respective conversation rate changes, if possible?
And could you link to a live version of the transformed pages?
As a side note, are you aware that "Remix" is also the name of a popular frontend dev library?
Cheers,
Daniel
PS: I posted a landing page "grill request" directly before your post, for codelantis.com . If you want to return the roast :-)
thanks for the pointers dan! yes i'll add the links for sure. Have to ask clients about the conversion rates so imma do that (if they get back that is lol)
damn had no clue it was a frontend library interesting - omw to capture their Seo Juice now
yes I'll roast your page as well soon as i have some free time
"damn had no clue it was a frontend library interesting - omw to capture their Seo Juice now"
That's the spirit! 😄