🍇 Product Fruits - once again redesigned
We've changed the design of the Product Fruits landing page - https://productfruits.com
I would appreciate your feedback.
Thanks!
We've changed the design of the Product Fruits landing page - https://productfruits.com
I would appreciate your feedback.
Thanks!
Hey there!
I'm a product designer in NYC. Happy to give my 2-cents. :)
Overall the site feels fresh.
I will say that it was a bit hard to figure out what your company actually does though.
I would really highlight this statement, since it get's at the core of what you do:
"Easy-to-integrate onboarding and feedback tools."
I would even simplify the main messaging and focus on just one of these (on-boarding or feedback).
Generally speaking your headers should be more informational and less aspirational.
Take a look at Robinhood, note how each header makes it clear what exactly you'll learn about if you read more:
https://robinhood.com/us/en/
Example:
"Break Free from Commission Fees"
Compared to:
"Tools that make your users love your web app"
This feels too vague, which makes it feel like fluff.
Hope this isn't too harsh. There's really a lot of good stuff here!
Take care and stay safe!
J
It definitely isn't too harsh! I like the Robinhood example, I'll try to polish the titles. Thanks!
Awesome, lemme know if there's anything else I can help with!
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Wondering if you could offer some feedback too! (Totally cool if you don't want to)
I think our site has some issues. I still need to add in more assets that show how the product works.
Two questions for the current site:
Is it clear what the product is for?
Does the site make you want to use the product?
(I'd prefer honesty over kindness here!)
http://magicmorning.co/
Yeah, sure!
I would choose a different style of images on the top. I mean I like the idea of them and it gives a clear message about your app but my first thought was this app is something for kids - it just looks like it. Also, the mobile phone mockup is too dark, I didn't recognize it for the first time so I didn't know this is a mobile app.
Otherwise, I like the scrolling effect. I would add more images or illustrations though. Or check https://www.revolut.com/ - they have a nice scroll effect with mobile app screenshots.
Same with boxes below it - it feels like something is not loading correctly and also I tend to click on them but there is no action so I somehow miss the point of them.
There is a bug - only "H" of the email in the footer is clickable :)
Hope this helps!
Hey!
Thanks for this feedback.
Yeah those designers (with the cartoon characters) are from an older version of the app. Agree that it looks a bit too childish!
I'll be making updating those assets.
Thanks for the suggestion, I like what Revolut is doing here.
Thanks for calling out the bug too!