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Rate my landing page

by Ugur Tekbas

Hi hackers,

https://nbaticketadvisor.com/

Before big launch I've created a landing page to collect e-mails of potential customers. Tell me what I can improve/change/remove, any feedback is appreciated.

Ugur Tekbas's avatarUgur Tekbas
on October 10, 2023
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    What I like about your landing page is that the copy and value proposition is super clear. Well done!

    Some small feedback:

    • "We'll notify you via email when it's the perfect time to purchase your tickets."
    • Consider elevating the prominence of the "About" section. I enjoyed reading about your "Why?" and thought this link was too buried in the footer.
    • In your CTA I'm not sure why you say "No spam!". Reading that actually gives me pause to submit my email.
    sagarnyc's avatar sagarnyc
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    3 years ago
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      Thanks a lot for your feedback, it means a lot.

      1. I added the missing 'the' to the copy, great catch.
      2. I wanted users to focus on what the product is, instead of giving them different pages. Plus I don't know where to put About link :) to the header? Where would you put it?
      3. Wow great that you shared. I wanted to remove people's objection, if they're afraid I'm gonna send them multiple emails, ads. Wanted to tell them I won't do such a thing. Maybe I should try different copies 🤔
      Ugur Tekbas's avatar Ugur Tekbas
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      3 years ago
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        Sorry for the delayed response!

        I think that's a fair point about managing objections, but for me it brought up an objection that I had never considered.

        Regarding the About link the header could work. I recently just put up my landing page and settled on a "The story behind X" section at the bottom of the page: https://webmoo.co/

        sagarnyc's avatar sagarnyc
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        3 years ago
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          Thanks a lot for your feedback, I already applied the changes, I'll find a good place for about link.

          You have a great landing page there btw, website screenshots really helps to understand what it does.

          Ugur Tekbas's avatar Ugur Tekbas
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          3 years ago
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