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cool. After reading more of your copy, I am unclear of your understanding of mental health. It would be wise to be transparent with your mental health credentials, in the Why Us.

Tully is here to listen, support, and guide you towards better mental health and wellbeing through meaningful conversations.

Super, spot on!

Your newest Smart Friend. Supercharged by AI

Copy is good. 'Smart Friend is great. Rest OK could be tweaked a bit...

Never feel lost or hopeless again

'Never 'is an absolute. Never is typically an over-promise. Rare anyone anything can deliver on 'Never'. Sometimes, yes. Majority, yes. Never, NOPE. From a self-awareness perspective when you (aka any human) uses the word 'never' it means they have unaddressed something around the statement. There will be an assumption the person is not owning. You can test this out for yourself. It could be around the concept of this app, the launch of this app.

Instead be honest in the copy.
Some examples:
"Are you tired of feeling a sense of dispair, or helplessness, or perhaps you have tried alot of things and nothing is quite working. ...
"Our goal is to be your buddy, your go to point to ask whatever question is on your mine. Create a space you feel safe to be yourself and ask whatever is on your mind. Be that buddy that is always there, available"

Change your life, one chat at a time.

Over-promise. You cannot guarantee the tool will change someone's life. Saying that tells me the developer really does not understand human potential. Undermines your cred big time. Plus it is outright annoying to read marketing gimmickery. You could say 'Start the journey of self-awareness... ' or 'Change one thing that deeply matters to you, using a specialised chat... '

Maximise your potential
Power of Tully

Tells me nothing. Generic statements are of no value, just noise.

Features you will love

naahh.. How one earth can you or anyone know what I would love, without knowing me. Marketing guff.

Simple Transparent Pricing

Typically if the dev uses the word transparent, it means they are not transparent. Demonstrate transparency rather than tell.

• What is 1000 words per month. Yeeck.. who wants to count words.. when trying to get to know a platform.That will erode any feeling comfort super fast.
• What is 5 approx conversations. A conversation is a conversation. How on earth does one have an approx conversation ?? Does that mean, midway thru the conversation where the user is say sharing feeling lost or something.. and the bot goes "no, stop there.. no more words left". That would be so absurdly bad.
• your free tier on the model feels very stingy to me. With mental health people need time to get comfortable. Need time unconstrained. I would suggest changing to a number of days of unrestricted use so they can truelly get a sense of platform.

Get notified when we launch and get free early access.

change the font, a little -- to distinguish slightly.. This is required as it is NOT dialogue but direction to user. Perhaps a more upright thin font as it is a direction. This same font should be used for all directions throughout the website.

Other comments:
Your copy needs reviewing on all pages to ensure
1 honesty versus over-promise (you have a strong tendency to over-promise) -- so you need to sort that out before launch because it will come thru in everything you design.
2 be real, be transparency, treat others with the deepest regard and respect. If you do this as you write your copy, your will create the feeling of an environment that feels safe
I have given you sufficient examples for you to readdress. You will need to do the self-awareness work first. Perhaps detox from all social media and external influences for a week, so you can listen to within. Twitter is the worse to keep ones focus on the external versus listening to within.

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then to scroll down to see all the bubble full