ROAST cold email to the competitor user - (CodeCanyon)

Hi,

My SaaS sell licences for WordPress plugins creator. My competitor is CodeCanyon.

The idea is to send cold email to the CodeCanyon user who pays high commission on CodeCanyon.

I would like if you give me some tips to improve cold email for better conversions.

Caption: Satisfying customer wants to give you back

Hi [Name],

I’ve been using your plugins [plugin X] for WordPress web sites and wanted personally to thank you for great work.

I know you pay unreasonable high commission at the CodeCanyon. To reduce costs, add alternative recurring funnel to your business.

My team created a SaaS for licensing and selling WordPress plugins. I would like to give you free access. No strings attached.

We create recurring payment plans on top of the lifetime plan you have at the CodeCanyon. This decision will have a massive impact on your business growth.

We create a secured payment page for your plugin. Your customers pay and automatically upgrade to the premium plugin.

Every time you create a new version, push to the GitHub or Bitbucket and your licensed customers will get a new version instantaneously.

License Bridge is a service we build and I want to give you Starter Plan for 6 months free. That is enough time to test out the recurring payments and our service.

Reply to tell me, what do you think about adding an alternative funnel with recurring revenue to your stream?