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Roast my HR SaaS Startup Landing Page

by Vera

Hey!

I've been working on my HR leave management SaaS startup for the past few weeks.

Please roast my landing page in terms of the design and also the copywriting!

Let me know if the product's value proposition is clear. https://takeleave.umso.co

Vera's avatarVera
on January 29, 2023
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    Hi Vera,

    Some feedback:

    • The links in the menu don't work
    • The links in the footer go to the same url
    • The links in the Get started section go to the same url

    Can you in exchange roast the website of my file manager: Ant Commander Pro ?

    JAnthony's avatar JAnthony
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      Hey Anthony! Just looked through your site.

      Here's a summary of my feedback for you!

      What I like:

      • Clear nav bar
      • All links are working

      What can be improved

      • I think you can move the "powerful incremental search, easy navigation" product feature description below your introduction "a powerful file manager for developer" the reason being so is because I have to learn about what your product is first before I start to ask myself "what features does it have?"
      • Image of Ant Commander Pro is a little small, i can't seem to see what the interface looks like or read the words
      • Instead of "apply for a free beta license key" you can try to put the instructions "download now" instead of "apply for a free beta license key". All these different options will confuse a user, as you are giving them 6 options to choose from and they may not know what to do.

      Let me know if you have any more questions and feel free to contact me via twitter for a quicker response :)

      Vera's avatar Vera
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      4 years ago
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        Thank you!

        JAnthony's avatar JAnthony
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        4 years ago
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      Hey Anthony! Thank you so much for your feedback, I've updated my page since :) I'll go take a look at your site right now!

      Vera's avatar Vera
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    Overall, I think it's great! I like the details, breakdown of pricing, and general look and feel.

    One thing I would change are the first lines of your page for something like:

    "Track employee time off seamlessly" to "Simplify Time-Off Tracking"

    "Effortlessly Manage Employee Time-Off with Our Automated Leave Tracking System" to "Automate Employee Leave Management with Our Platform."

    alvivanco's avatar alvivanco
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      Hey Alejandro! Thank you so much for your feedback. You sound very knowledgable at copywriting for landing pages and I've sent you a follow on Twitter! I hope to learn more from you and to exchange ideas!

      Will be happy to help you with design if you ever need it :)

      Also I've updated my landing page again (https://takeleave.io) and implemented some of your feedback! Thanks so much!

      Vera's avatar Vera
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        new page looks great

        happy to connect anytime

        alvivanco's avatar alvivanco
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      Thank you so much for your help! Good luck with Social Guard too, let me know when you launch anywhere, I'd be happy to help out with giving it my support! Feel ask me if you ever need help on design or chat with me about indiehacking anytime via Twitter! Always happy to support a fellow indiehacker :)

      Vera's avatar Vera
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