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Roast my Landing Page

Hey πŸ‘‹

I just made some changes to my landing page and I would love to hear some feedback.

https://tail.so

Please be brutal! πŸ–

Thanks in advance,

on January 16, 2023
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    The over the fold area is clear, I already know what this product is about. I like that.

    What I don't like is that the website is fairly slow. It took a hot second for me to load, and a website speedtest confirms this: It took 10 seconds to fully load and it gets a speed rating of C-74 (out of A-100).

    I really like the before and after screenshots of what your product can do. The only thing I don't like is that these screenshots are about some fake lorem ipsum content. Why not show us screenshots of actual use cases? That would be even more powerful.

    Your use of punctuation in the page is inconsistent. For example, a sub headline "All the features you need, built-in." ends with a period, yet the very next one "Hand-crafted templates" does not.

    I like the fact you bring more color to the page by using icons in the features area. I would have gone with a bit more modern flat style icons instead of these 3D style ones, but it's probably just a matter of taste. But the main problem is that those features boxes have that on mouse hover effect and even the mouse cursor turns into the point cursor, both of which indicate these things are clickable buttons. But they are not. That's not good UX.

    Also, it's a bit paradoxical how your number one feature pitch is "super fast", when your website is slow.

    I like it a lot that at the end, when you also say that this website was made using Notion. That is a real world use case, very nice.

    I think your pricing seems fair. It's so fair, I would consider including that in the main page. Speaking of which, those pricing boxes also have confusing UX. You should either remove the on mouse hover effect, or make the entire boxes clickable. Now they are just confusing.

    Overall, I think this is pretty good. With small improvements, it could be even better. Well done!

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      WOW!!

      Thanks a lot for taking your time to write this long and very detailed review! All your points are valid and I will address them asap!

      Have a nice day, @jv16! β˜€οΈ