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Roast my landing page?

Guys I am building a no-code tool to help you build a portfolio site faster recently I build my landing page https://pfolio.me share your feedback on what is missing and what can I improve?

on January 18, 2022
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    Super cool website here's a couple of points I would change

    • Change the headline maybe something that clearly states the value propistion. "Create your ______ portfolio".

    • Maybe change the subheadline to something that relates to your target audience. ex: "Tired of your portfolio not impressing your employer"

    • I think the second section is a little glitchy I would probably make it a static image or have it animate without scrolling

    • For the third section I would use icons (desktop, phone, etc) to show the different views

    • In general I would focus on how this would help improve your customers lifes such as getting them that new job or getting new business vs talking about features like custom domains, etc.

    • I made this post a while ago maybe this will help - https://www.instagram.com/p/COaiPyDgEGq/

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      hey sindwani thanks for the valuable feedback I will improve all the points you have mentioned asap.