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Roast my landing page

by John Braat

Hi guys,

I'm looking for some feedback on the copy of my landing page for a Raycast extension :)

Happy about any other feedback you feel like giving as well.

You can find the page here: https://getshellbuddy.com

John Braat's avatarJohn Braat
on October 19, 2022
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    Hey John!

    I made a 4 minute roast of your website, you can see it below here.

    https://www.loom.com/share/3248e2cd72a441379242fa3f5133e764

    Overall, love the design, but I think you could be adding some more sections! Your website is a sales tool that works 24 /7, and you should take full advantage of that.

    I outlined a couple of things you could optimize in the video, but overall a very nice page!

    Hope you get some value out of this, and hope your product ends up doing well!

    GetHimMama's avatar GetHimMama
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    4 years ago
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      Hey Dakota!

      Thank you so much for taking the time to make a video and thanks for all the feedback!

      I will definitely be adding social proof and feature section 🚀

      Also, I have gotten good feedback for these buttons and a few inquiries how I made them. So, I decided to create a gist for them. It's TailwindCSS + React.

      You might be able to add those to your webflow sites

      Feel free to steal/adapt it:
      https://gist.github.com/JohnBra/79640695b48ada9653359b9adc83d8cc

      Thanks again for your feedback, I highly highly appreaciate it 💪

      John Braat's avatar John Braat
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      4 years ago
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    Here's some notes:

    1. I'm a developer, I don't use the shell too much though, so I often find myself looking up how to run commands
    2. Understood the headline
    3. Didn't understand this part "with the power of AI directly in Raycast!". I don't know what Raycast is.
    4. I like your embedded video. Now I think I know what your tool does, perhaps mentioning Raycast is unnecessary
    5. Okay reading further it looks like Raycast is some sort of app.
    6. I loled at this "YOU SHOULD NEVER RUN COMMANDS YOU DON'T KNOW". It's kind of funny in a way, since there's a high chance people will do this. I'm guilty of this.
    7. Okay reading the FAQ now I know what Raycast is

    I really like your landing page, and your tool seems somewhat useful. However I would say it's not really something I need. I'm kind of happy to just continue googling.

    angusbsc's avatar angusbsc
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    4 years ago
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      Thank you so much for your feedback @AnGuRuSO :)

      Yes, Raycast is a productivity app for mac.

      Googling is certainly a good alternative, especially if you aren't using Raycast in the first place :)

      John Braat's avatar John Braat
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      4 years ago
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