Hi Guys,
Made something over the weekend and am not sure if the landing page gave a clear message or not.
I need your help to roast it out so that I can improve 🙏
https://convertx.io
Hey Arvind,
Very clean landing page. One initial thing that threw me off was you spelled "abandoned" wrong. :) I had to Google just to make sure my eyes and brain weren't the issues.
The second section, with the cost explanation, I dislike how it's two columns. It doesn't read right to me. Also, give that section a header for others to quickly know it's talking about the pricing model.
I would add nav links to your header and have them link to each section. This way folks can jump to what they care about almost immediately.
The "How it works" section is good. I would adjust some of the wording. I don't need to know how many emails you send (or that you even send emails) at this point. Make it simple and obvious and don't try to over-explain here.
Since this product is very straightforward, I am still on the fence about the Features section. It is nice to highlight these features, but some see very redundant to me. I'll think about this more.
At the bottom of your page, make sure you have a newsletter sign-up - or some other lead capture form. I would also have another CTA here (or throughout the landing page) so that way I don't have to scroll back to the top to sign up.
Also, please go and proofread your copy. Some of it used terms like "wanna" instead of "want to," I would highly avoid that type of lingo.
Hope this is helpful!
Hi James,
Thank you for the detailed feedback. I really appreciate it.
I have fixed almost all the things, just confused about the pricing section... I am experimenting with it hopefully it will turn out more clear.
Again, thank you for your time.